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Jarrod's avatar

I wish you all the best with the pitch Ben. Public speaking is literally my worst nightmare so I cant help with much advice there, but I do work for an ad agency, and we pitch a lot. 3 minutes is a really short time, so you cant fluff around too much. I would present it as: Here is the problem (obesity levels) and back it up with both data and personal experience. Then here is our solution. Talk about why it works in human terms. I think you already explain all this stuff really well, so it should go really smoothly. Also make a nice looking presentation deck. No powerpoint!

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Richard Smith's avatar

Well done Ben, a great pitch and I am sure you’ll be successful. If I had one comment to change the pitch slightly, if you can help the listener personally relate to the struggle of weight loss and how Alfred will help them. Not an easy thing to do but if successful they then have a personal connection to Alfred. If you have a wordsmith available who can work their magic, it may help. Just my 2 cents mate, and you may disagree… that is allowed.

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